An Egyptian girl named Azeneth was waiting for Christmas eve on January 6th. She was preparing her backpack , when she was ready, her mother Isis told her that they couldn't travel in the hot air balloon to their grandparents' house because there was a lot of snow. Azeneth insisted that they could go by car.
When they were driving they had to stop the car, because of the snow storm and they had to stay in the "Rainbow hotel" some children in the hotel were waiting for Baba Noel and were decorating the place with a Christmas Lebkuchen and eating food .
Azeneth's grandparents called her daugther. They were worried so Isis told them they had to spend the night at the hotel. Azeneth asked a wish to Baba Noel, she closed her eyes. Her wish became real!!!! When she opened the biggest present her grandparents were inside!!!!
The following day all the family travelled back in the hot air balloon and they had the most fantastic and magic Christmas.
The following day all the family travelled back in the hot air balloon and they had the most fantastic and magic Christmas.
Camila Velasco
The story is very nice, but you should correct some mistakes, like tenses, some words and punctuation.
ReplyDeleteMiss Cynthia.
Cami, I edited your story so we can work with it next time that Guillermo comes.
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